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Required words:

1. Wafting 2. Daub 3. Whispers 4. Dank 5. Flutters 6. Perchance 7. Folly

8. Happenstance

The happenstance of love came with a daub of hungry came sweet and pure of scent came wafting on the wind. I sneezed after a moment an intense reaction to come on intense as folly leads one to whisper "come smell, lead on". And though whispers of remorse followed whistled like wind over heartburn chanted not scent, nonsense! trumpeted, not forward, turn and run! The flutters in my heart shivered quivered with each step nearer fretted to myself ignore your liver delivered myself to a dank smile. Oh, what could of been perchance was missed what could be spots on precious skin what could be sweet or sinister what could be dangerous or dazzling Never made it past the perfume salesman.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/22/2019 2:58:00 PM
Nice one Sheri thanks for your entry!
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 2/23/2019 10:42:00 PM
you are welcome John, fun contest!
Date: 2/22/2019 7:53:00 AM
Very nice lead up to the last line Sheri...Congrats on your win
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 2/23/2019 10:42:00 PM
Thanks very much Joseph!
Date: 2/19/2019 7:16:00 AM
Great final line and those several before it! Enjoyed, Sheri!
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Date: 2/15/2019 11:49:00 AM
The ending had me smiling so widely that my face almost cracked with sheer happiness, Sheri. I am diving in to read it again one more time.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 2/18/2019 5:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Caren, I am bad about my commenting due to limited access to the internet but hope to do better. I'm so glad you liked it.

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