Wanting

Wanting… Fills up time and clutters my mind. Make me happy, I don’t like waiting. The unknown hurts. Not knowing my heart – the worst pain of all.

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Bl Devnath

Date: 10/7/2015 12:57:00 AM

It's a mystery happens in mind and heart even after having inner consciousness. Unnecessarily unexpected automatic wanting prizes the worst pain. A 7 It's a great insight my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Pat Davis
Date: 10/7/2015 7:38:00 PM

Thank you BL. What a honor to have you and others take a look at my little poems. Connection makes the world a sweeter place. Pat

Avis Bailey

Date: 10/6/2015 10:56:00 PM

Pat, this is a very good write. It makes you stop and ponder the many ways wanting has affected our own lives. Keep up the good poetry and congrads being featured this week. It is a honor.

Pat Davis
Date: 10/7/2015 7:39:00 PM

Hi Avis, thank you for taking the time to read and comment! It is an honor and a gift. Pat

Floyd Neal

Date: 10/6/2015 9:22:00 PM

Pat this is a thought provoking poem. Very nice flow. Keep up the great work

Pat Davis
Date: 10/7/2015 7:40:00 PM

Thank you Floyd! Just getting started in all this on PS. My Lifetime PM was actually for my sister Pam DeRemer. Waiting for it to switch to her. :-) Pat

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/6/2015 7:30:00 PM

Excellent poem. Sometimes, heart is not understood.

Pat Davis
Date: 10/7/2015 7:41:00 PM

Thank you Nayda!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2015 6:34:00 PM

Nice seeing this one featured here today. I like it.

Pat Davis
Date: 10/7/2015 7:41:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! :)

Cori Wunderlin

Date: 8/26/2015 11:45:00 PM

Pretty amazing did you know that you made it to the "home page" the week of August 30th. Great job!

Pat Davis
Date: 8/27/2015 3:40:00 PM

Thank you Cori! Yes, amazing that my little poem is on the home page! Wow! Not sure why; and happy to writing at all. This is fun on Poetry Soup. :) I'm still learning my way around the PS site. Thanks for the encouragement. Pat

Ilahtpan Napthali

Date: 8/25/2015 7:52:00 AM

Not only an amazing piece, but "seasoned" too!

Pat Davis
Date: 8/27/2015 3:42:00 PM

Thank you Ilahtpan for reading and commenting. I'm am new at this and I'm having fun with this inspiring site full of poetry. My seasoning must be my ripe old age! :) Pat

Louzana Nubani

Date: 8/24/2015 8:19:00 PM

Beautiful write , real and aching, loved it <3

Pat Davis
Date: 8/27/2015 3:45:00 PM

Thank you Louzana for reading and commenting! It is very encouraging to get a comment as I am quite the beginner. :) Pat

Pam Deremer

Date: 8/19/2015 6:35:00 PM

Your off to a good start!

Pat Davis
Date: 8/27/2015 3:46:00 PM

Thank you Pam for inspiring me to write again! This is so much fun!