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Wandering Minds

I looked out the window And saw brains with little feet Wandering through the streets Some were climbing, others reading Some questioning other minds Some brains seem to be running a mile a minute Searching for new answers New ways to figure out things And as the day ended They jumped back into their windows Back into their owners heads To rest for another day of wandering

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/25/2013 11:09:00 AM
Ebony, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/15/2013 2:02:00 PM
Wonderfully creative!! I truly enjoyed reading this and all the images that came to mind.. a busy city street.. a lone person durring lunch... a childs play ground... very fun! ;0) All my best! Amy
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Date: 5/15/2013 8:19:00 AM
Clever !! Well written analogy and unique topic. Really enjoyed this. Welcome to P/Soup
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Date: 5/15/2013 4:52:00 AM
This is very creative...love it!!!!! Welcome to Poetry Soup!!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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