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Walls

Too thin these weak walls stand, keeping cold from comfort; dividing hope from dying dream’s lament.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/21/2008 10:28:00 PM
Great 'd' alliteration in your fourth line... perfect form and flow. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/8/2008 9:24:00 AM
This is the first of your work that I've read and like it very much. Ill read through your writes for sure. BG
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