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Wallflowers with their faces raised, and others too, with heads bowed low; the weak, the stronger, eyes all glazed... those flowers there all in a row. Wallflowers placed against the wall, stems bent and twisted, on display. In a long row, they line the hall, like wilted plants, no role to play. Wallflowers there lined up as eight; tomorrow perhaps there are less. So soon replaced by whims of fate... more added flowers in distress. They stab the heart of those who pass; eyes look into our depth of soul. Blank eyes that glare like faded glass... sad hearts that know there is no goal. Wallflowers there against the wall; from wheelchairs come the quiet cries. I hear their silent, pleading call... My anger I cannot disguise. Sandra M. Haight ~8th Place~ Premiere Contest: Weepy Quatrain Sponsor: Laura Loo Judged: 05/21/2016 ================================ I wrote about this moment, which is intensely frozen in my mind, because of a visit to a local nursing home. (photo from Goggle images.)

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Date: 5/24/2016 7:59:00 AM
I'm glad to see this one again. Congrats, it is still a personal favorite!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/25/2016 7:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard, for stopping by once again with your supportive comment and congrats! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 5/22/2016 8:52:00 PM
wow! Sandra, heartfelt poem congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/25/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for stopping by with your comment and congratulations. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/22/2016 8:39:00 PM
wow, I can really tell that this moment frozen in time affected you greatly, because this is OUTSTANDING work, Sandra. Wish I had thought of doing mine like this, thinking of things I have seen that made me so angry . BIG congrats in the contest.fave
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/25/2016 7:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea, for your very supportive comments, congrats, and the wonderful fave! Yes...very sad for some at these nursing homes. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/22/2016 8:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/25/2016 7:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, BL. Sandra
Date: 5/22/2016 7:23:00 PM
Sandra, wow.....very touching and heartbreaking. what I was looking for..thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/25/2016 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Luloo, for another fine contest for my placement! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/10/2015 11:38:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome win. SKAT
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Date: 11/9/2015 10:36:00 PM
On having to repeatedly visit my good Lady's mother in such a place over a period of time, I can relate to this piece, Sandra, and you've captured it so well. Death's waiting room........ Well done. Viv x
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Date: 11/9/2015 6:59:00 PM
For me this is a personal favourite. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/6/2015 1:48:00 PM
A heartbreaking write, Sandra. You have captured the plight of these lovely older people in your poem. So sad. Love, Kim
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2015 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. Visiting nursing homes really upsets me...I appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/6/2015 11:10:00 AM
I have that same image in my head, It burns my heart and fires my rage at how easily we discard lives, so I brought my loved one home. A well expressed sad tribute or perhaps a condemnation to what we have become. Well portrayed. DMB
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/7/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and supportive comments, DMB. What a selfless act for you to bring home your loved one! I appreciate your stopping by. Sandra

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