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Walking With Sorrow

I walk with sorrow and hear the distant noise of crows and mourning doves, in the wet mist nature's breath rises slowly from the forest floor, along a path covered by fallen leaves my hands resting on the cold layered stones, of a wall built by slaves stretches for miles their agony releases in mumbled tones, in my mind as I pass in silence the crunching sound of each step I take feels like an intrusion into a time I can't understand trees rotting, some crushed the wall where they fell, bring a feeling of anguish to the scene a coat of terror worn by shadowed death, from the time of whips and chains ghostly figures haunt this place appearing and disappearing over time floating in the mist, as though still pulling rocks from the ground their fingers covered in blood, staining each one as they pile one upon another, while the walls grew taller now crumbled ruins, lost to memory only crows and doves stand guard here now their haunting sounds cascading over stones crying out in sorrow from a time beyond my comprehension 12/26/13

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Date: 3/14/2022 7:27:00 PM
"they pile one upon another, while the walls grew taller" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/3/2015 9:59:00 AM
haunting imagery I loved this write Frederic many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/3/2015 8:58:00 AM
A masterpiece,congrats on this big win and have a lovely Weekend Frederic...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:24:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held last year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very odd contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "BLINDFOLDED" if you'd like or have the time. Always & Forever *LINDA*
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Date: 1/16/2014 3:41:00 PM
Buck up, old fellow. There'll be a brighter day tomorrow. Seriously.....Enjoyed as usual. -Dean
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/16/2014 4:07:00 PM
thank you Dean, brighter days, for me yes , for them not so much
Date: 12/27/2013 4:53:00 PM
Another fine poem from you.
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