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Walking With Fall

Walking under warmth of sun Sitting on carpet, of fallen leaves As fall makes the leaves burn, to orange, red and yellow

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Date: 10/26/2023 12:25:00 PM
This is a great verse Arastu. Delightful. Such vivid imagery. Love the last two lines in particular. Glorious autumn depicted so well in your lovely poem. Really enjoyed it.Thank you for sharing. :)
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 10/26/2023 5:50:00 PM
Thanks :-)

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