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Walking Through the Flames

I feel the intensity staring down upon me as I walk through the forest, All eyes are on me, but it's ok. I'm ready to face you, I'm ready to face anyone that comes at me. You've knocked me down again and again, That is over now. The time has come for you to see what you have done. I walk out of the flames, and come to face you. This is what you have done to me, I see a sudden change in your eyes, but not the heart. I lift my head and move away. We are no longer pieces of a puzzle, I raise my head up high, and move on. The time for us is over, no longer shall we be a piece. You move your way, I move mine. You've found the pieces to complete your puzzle now it's time for me to complete mine. You will not be apart of it. Family is no longer there when I hear your name. This will be goodbye. I will stand strong; alone. I will be completed one day. I will get there alone, Until the end, we shall say good bye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/10/2013 4:30:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Lexi
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:56:00 PM
Hi Lexi , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
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Date: 11/24/2013 12:07:00 AM
Hi, Lexi, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/23/2013 5:18:00 PM
ps...This poem fits the theme in my contest perfectly. ...Linda
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Lexi Frizzell
Date: 11/23/2013 5:22:00 PM
I entered.
Date: 11/23/2013 5:17:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Lexi ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2013 5:16:00 PM
deep write, Lexi,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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