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Remember, the gift you give no matter how insignificant, it will change the world.

In days of perpetual ridicule. I stopped here and saw you. The painful cry from a broken voice. Showed to me that you had no choice. In sweltering and freezing days of life. You carried on knowing no end to your strife. This faithful day I reached out for your hand. With tears in your eyes you started to stand. I wondered if you had eaten any food today. You said no that you have no money to pay. I offered a gift of life for you to start again With a grateful hug and crying we begin. Days and nights you were growing beautifully. It delighted me that you are a wonderful gift to see. Everyone here on Earth is worth more than gold. For our father gave us love and compassion as foretold.

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Date: 8/23/2023 7:15:00 PM
Very good rhyming and subject matter.
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Dexter Greener
Date: 8/24/2023 12:24:00 PM
Thank You for those kind words

Book: Shattered Sighs