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Walking Away

There was never any doubt; I'm done reaching out; Tired of the cold shrug of indifference. Give and you shall receive. What? A cold slap; Hearing the constant flap. Of all the excuses I've heard before; Showing I was never meant for more; Just show me to the door; Just another bothersome sore. But I will not change the nature of me; Instead I just set it all free; What was never meant to be. Nothing left to hear or say, Time has come to walk away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 12/2/2020 12:04:00 PM
Strong but sad Carl. Just popping in again. Hope you have been okay?
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Date: 3/5/2020 5:21:00 PM
A poignant poem, Carl.
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Date: 1/7/2020 3:50:00 AM
I'd hoped it was fiction Carl, it must be so difficult to remain in a relationship that has turned toxic. So glad to see a PM star by your name, if you need any help in adding music, pics etc do let me know:-) hugs jan x
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Carl Fraser
Date: 1/7/2020 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Blessings Carl
Date: 1/1/2020 12:32:00 PM
Hello Carl Fraser, I also hope this is fiction. If not take a breathe, then try to talk again. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/2/2020 2:37:00 PM
Hello Carl Fraser, yes you get to the point when you just know. I wish you the best. have a nice day my friend.
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Carl Fraser
Date: 1/1/2020 12:39:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Darlene, yes it's real situation and you get to a point where you just know. Thanks Carl
Date: 1/1/2020 11:24:00 AM
I have been here Carl; wonderful as this is I do hope it is fiction. Good morning Carl :)
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Carl Fraser
Date: 1/1/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thanks FJ, very nice to hear from you. Thanks for your comments and have a Happy New Year, Blessings Carl
Date: 1/1/2020 11:15:00 AM
Sometimes it's best to walk when your words aren't heard anymore
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Carl Fraser
Date: 1/1/2020 12:42:00 PM
Yes that's true, kind of where it's at. Thanks for stopping by, Carl

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