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Walking

As I walk under a sky Of thousands shades of blue With the sun kiss warmth Touching my skin All I can think about Is only you Possessor of my soul, Why are you so beautiful? You’ve shaken my being Just by knowing I am also a small part Of your beauty If the birds can speak It will tell me the secret of its flight If the sun can talk It will send me the song of its light If the moon can sigh It will let me know its longing Is the same as mine Every moment the universe breathes I become entangled with its beats Till there’s no more separating ways Between being and existing Just loving… you I keep walking inside your immensity As human being As lover As a woman As a daughter I can go on giving my low self names and titles But can’t you see how insignificance this me is? Sky, sun, moon, flowers We’re all making our existence Yet the only one here is Just you, The Beloved! "Today is my birthday and I just make one of the most difficult choice in life so far, leaving poetrysoup. There are so many poets here that I have come to care and even love, yet goodbye is inevitable. Thank you to those who has allowed me to walk inside your immensity... there are no words to define your beauty. May your journey is filled with leaves of speech, flowers of love and memories of songs... I salut you, dear poet."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/4/2024 10:30:00 PM
did ya hear mine he...tickling yourn sensitive...shhh, listen...shhhhh, just listen
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:35:00 AM
Still miss you, Linda
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:54:00 PM
Hi Mian, wonder if you are ever coming back. Love SKAT
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Date: 8/16/2015 10:25:00 PM
Hi MIA
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Date: 3/21/2013 8:11:00 AM
I'm wondering if your ever coming back... miss your v hello's and poems... always~ Linda
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Date: 1/1/2013 2:10:00 PM
Mia , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD
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Date: 12/17/2012 4:37:00 PM
hoping you will come back soon..pd
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Date: 11/30/2012 6:39:00 AM
Beautiful piece Mia... vey enjoyed... Michael
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Date: 11/21/2012 8:07:00 PM
Hi Mia,Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 6/16/2012 12:41:00 AM
Wow. Well written poem I must say - JH
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Date: 6/2/2012 1:18:00 PM
Iv'e really enjoyed this one MIA,, thank you for your great comments on mine and why are you going?? I among many shall miss you yours Joe..)
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Date: 5/28/2012 7:56:00 PM
you are going to miss me.
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Date: 5/11/2012 12:07:00 PM
better to be M.I.A. then dead maybe you will be found and if its not too presuptionuous a word of advice.....its always the weak that react to the strong so always be mindful of your reactons
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Date: 5/10/2012 9:08:00 PM
Hi, Mia...Tomorrow is my Dad's birthday... and my first granddaughter... they both celebrate on May 11th... happy birthday... to you... I'm was hoping your new road would be here on the soup. I wish i could encourage you to stay. I meant every word i said through your soup-mail. After reading your very heartfelt mail.. I've been wanting to reach out to you. But, my internet and connection are at it's worse. Hopeful you stop by and visit, and maybe you can give me your e-mail If you like I would like to keep in touch with you, I'm really sad. Maybe I should have not woken you up that other day. your poems where all peacefully asleep.. (in a good way) and there i go wondering where you where at. Mia, a super happy birthday to you. Gosh, i'm sad~ your song will remain here with me..always yours truly The Poet Destroyer... xox... from Texas...
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:59:00 PM
MIA, no...no! DId you remove all your poems...please let me know...I've been having so much trouble with my internet connections... please let me know... :-(
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:26:00 AM
M.I.A. happy birthday, soory you are leaving, hopefully to exciting new ventures..David
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Date: 5/10/2012 8:49:00 AM
Happy birthday, dear Mia. Why? huwahuhuhuhuuu, am gonna miss your words. I hope for the best only to you! I love how you compare ur feelings with the sun, birds and moon. Bye :)
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Date: 5/10/2012 1:45:00 AM
Happy birthday M.I.A. - so sorry for you leaving P-S - I salut you for all your lovely poems.- Wish you all the best !!!! - Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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