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Walk With You In My Mind

I walked after the rain it was so calm and quiet I did not mind, because I found a chance to be alone with you in my mind. You did not say much again and I did not mind the silence the sidewalk was long but we walked to the very end me, with you in my mind. The birds were singing happy songs and all of the trees wearing smiles it was nice walking after the rain just me, with you in my mind.

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James Inman

Date: 9/18/2017 12:07:00 PM

Your first post remains one of my favorites of yours.

A Moment Like This
Date: 9/18/2017 2:20:00 PM

Thank you! I wish I could write something again ... but I just can't:)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/8/2016 12:00:00 PM

I like both the image you create and the involvement of romantic fantasy. Very fresh and mellow. ~ Regards // paul

A Moment Like This
Date: 6/9/2016 9:00:00 AM

Nice comment. Thank you!

James Inman

Date: 6/5/2016 9:01:00 AM

A lovely, gentle write.

A Moment Like This
Date: 6/5/2016 8:52:00 PM

Thanks again ...

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2016 11:06:00 PM

A M L T.,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

A Moment Like This
Date: 6/2/2016 8:16:00 AM

Thank you for the warm welcome and the kind words, SKAT :) Poetry Soup ... Unknown place, but feels like home!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2016 10:54:00 PM

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A Moment Like This
Date: 6/2/2016 8:42:00 AM

THANK YOU ...