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Walk It Through

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I'm not dressed for the mud But this path drew me in I could turn back, maybe I should But I'm dodging the din The quiet of the farm track That leads me back home Not really wandering But essence of the roam I need to gather my thoughts Establish if today is the day I pull myself together Keep harm at bay I'll be talking to an expert Or someone trained at least I just need to get my worry out Before I'm consumed by the beast I know my issue Is the half thought run riot If I get enough of them out I can bathe in the quiet I don't particularly care About image per se But like to prove I can show up If my mood swung that way Self evaluation A poem about nothing much Just the need to recalibrate And transcendental thrust But it seems that I placed a banana in my bag It got squashed between my laptop And note book I don't think I'm the new improved version Just yet :)

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Paige Hind

Date: 9/28/2023 5:45:00 PM

You write down to earth.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/28/2023 10:29:00 PM

I have a down to earth smell about my work bag too - banany hehe! Thank you Paige, always kind x

I Am Anaya

Date: 9/27/2023 9:40:00 AM

I found this Dilly, "I can ask others for their opinions, but ultimately, it's I who'll decide. I'll be the ruler of my dominion, determining which road I'll take with pride." -Self-Reliance by Delicato. Stuck in muck or carefree, either way we worry it seems. I've ruined boots. Like the humor in the eighth stanza!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/27/2023 10:08:00 AM

Thank you Anaya for the time you've taken with the poem and your comment - I think the squashed banana is going to be less funny as the days go on :) thank you for your kind words