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Walk in the woods

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Walk in the woods

Walking through the woods 
dusk falling 
under trees 
Arched like soldiers 
Night's calling 
Looking up eerily 

White milky smiling 
through the gap 
the moon clowns 
Dusk falling smiles 
On the bay 

Beautiful reflection 
of lights 
Sparkling like diamonds 
The reflection 
of mountains 
Natures looking glass 
Creating the image of shadows 

The trees arms 
arched at the side 
Twisted with the age 
of centuries 
Looking down eerily 
Beautiful reality 
Driving away 
breath taking 

Three deer 
crossing the road 
Blinded by the lights 
Stopping 
one,two, three 
Staring into their eyes 
Turning their head 
after distraction 
A pause in time 

Walking out 
of a vision 
A living memory 
Shared 
with my view

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  1. Date: 10/27/2014 3:38:00 PM
    I loved the images this poem creates.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 10/27/2014 3:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you kindly shaun a day out for a stroll dusk was falling
  1. Date: 10/1/2013 8:47:00 PM
    nice winning poem............. LUV.............. SKAT

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:36:00 PM
    Beautiful poem!....natures looking glass...awesome.....congratulations

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:02:00 PM
    this is a wonderful one to read. Glad to see it now. Congrats for your win.,

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 12:31:00 PM
    liam, a lovely winning poem...Linda

  1. Date: 9/30/2013 12:05:00 PM
    Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Liam. - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 3:46:00 PM
    what a beautiful journey through the woods you have taken us on...thank you for that....very creative and well written poem :)

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/7/2013 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ever so much sandra deeply appreciated
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 10:23:00 AM
    Hi Liam, i'm going to be serious now. I did forget this isn't Cs. As usual my friend i did enjoy this. Once again your words flowed out some beautiful pictires. I always enjoyed walking through woods at night. It can be so eerie and so alive. I want to see the wood nymphs dancing round the great oak while pan plays hes pipes. Your canvas hangs beautiful. One last thing, didn't you notice the cuddly bear jumping up and down waving its arms. That was me, i was ready for you to take the picture.

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/6/2013 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    PAN IS VERY QUITE WITHOUT HIS TIGHTS IT BROUGHT THE MAGIC OUT HA HA WAS THAT YOU SWEET JUMPING CHEESE MONSTER YOU LOOKED LIKE BIG FOOT HA HA
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Good morning liam, thank you for sharing such a beautiful view. (under trees Arched like soldiers ) love the amazing portrait here. I know it so well. A unique way of imagery. always~ Linda

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/6/2013 3:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU EVER SO KINDLY FOR THE SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED LINDA
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 6:23:00 AM
    I can see this view of the mountains in my mind and capture the deers crossing..A nice remembarance for me of when we were in Scotland near lochlomond for holiday and i saw the crossing deers .lovely nature poem

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 9/6/2013 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    THANK YOU FOR THE DEAREST AND MOST BEAUTIFUL COMMENT WE