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Walk In the Woods

Walking through the woods dusk falling under trees Arched like soldiers Night's calling Looking up eerily White milky smiling through the gap the moon clowns Dusk falling smiles On the bay Beautiful reflection of lights Sparkling like diamonds The reflection of mountains Natures looking glass Creating the image of shadows The trees arms arched at the side Twisted with the age of centuries Looking down eerily Beautiful reality Driving away breath taking Three deer crossing the road Blinded by the lights Stopping one,two, three Staring into their eyes Turning their head after distraction A pause in time Walking out of a vision A living memory Shared with my view

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Date: 10/27/2014 3:38:00 PM
I loved the images this poem creates.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/27/2014 3:57:00 PM
thank you kindly shaun a day out for a stroll dusk was falling
Date: 10/1/2013 8:47:00 PM
nice winning poem............. LUV.............. SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:36:00 PM
Beautiful poem!....natures looking glass...awesome.....congratulations
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Date: 10/1/2013 3:02:00 PM
this is a wonderful one to read. Glad to see it now. Congrats for your win.,
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:31:00 PM
liam, a lovely winning poem...Linda
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:05:00 PM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Liam. - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2013 3:46:00 PM
what a beautiful journey through the woods you have taken us on...thank you for that....very creative and well written poem :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 3:44:00 AM
thank you ever so much sandra deeply appreciated
Date: 9/6/2013 8:45:00 AM
Good morning liam, thank you for sharing such a beautiful view. (under trees Arched like soldiers ) love the amazing portrait here. I know it so well. A unique way of imagery. always~ Linda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 3:03:00 PM
THANK YOU EVER SO KINDLY FOR THE SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED LINDA
Date: 9/6/2013 6:23:00 AM
I can see this view of the mountains in my mind and capture the deers crossing..A nice remembarance for me of when we were in Scotland near lochlomond for holiday and i saw the crossing deers .lovely nature poem
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/6/2013 6:31:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR THE DEAREST AND MOST BEAUTIFUL COMMENT WE

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