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Walk Down

Taking a walk down I hope it’s not very hot Didn’t check in Hell Used get out of Hell free card Now will stop smell the roses Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/8/2012 7:04:00 PM

Great idea with that card, Russell! How about a get into heaven free card too..?...Many will get in by the skin of their teeth so we better get some of those cards circulating!...nice ending...Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2012 9:08:00 PM

hahaha, I really enjoyed this, get out of hell free!!! yep, that is the card we all need!!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/4/2012 10:08:00 AM

Wonder where you live, must be down south but it's hot and muggy here today. I'm smelling lilacs today but roses coming soon!