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Waking Up With a Goose and Dandelion Dust

My sight is blurry and in a hurry Where is my underwear? Have a pain in my drain, don't need to strain Do I hear wind and rain? My mouth feels like dandelion dust Rinsing goose feathers or bust Should I trust the starburst Or just sit and curse or maybe worse? Contest: Boisterous comedy for John Freeman Picture of a man with the morning blues, wild nonfocusing eyes, and dandelion, goose down or starburst in his hair!!

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Date: 8/22/2011 7:36:00 PM
congrats on your first place win with this bosterous write. Glenna
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Doris
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Doris. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:11:00 AM
Well written and a lot of fun. Tony
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Date: 8/22/2011 1:07:00 AM
. heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:22:00 AM
Great piece about the picture. congratulations o your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:39:00 PM
funny one Doris! Congratulations to you on a fine win In John's contest! your name looks good in the lights
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:23:00 PM
Good poem following a great title. congratulations on the win, Mike
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:16:00 PM
Congrats Doris on your first place win with this fabulous funny write my friend.. we are on vacation in Florida with grand babies for two weeks luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:10:00 PM
Doris, well done, congrats and just love the title, David
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Date: 8/21/2011 3:48:00 PM
So pleased to see that this was your poem Doris, Beautiful job, congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/21/2011 1:59:00 PM
whoa... boisterous indeed! Way to go, Doris!
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Date: 8/17/2011 2:11:00 PM
super humor Doris ..luv the breath being like dandelion dust.. awesome.. great entry for the contest ..good luck luv.. guess I should have title it fountain of youth then? sounds like a place I want to find..haha..
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:54:00 PM
A fine Limerick this would have been ! *smiles* Awesome delight dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Doris....much love, james
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Date: 8/16/2011 4:32:00 PM
Wow, i've never been that Blue Doris, you have sure been inventive with this..
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Date: 8/16/2011 10:36:00 AM
this one brought a smile, so creative. thank you for commenting on summer twilight.
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Date: 8/16/2011 12:12:00 AM
I like that you focused on the picture, which was so challenging to me I just did my own joke on something totally different. I hope it scores ya high! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:06:00 PM
Too funny. I identify with this man.
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