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Waking Dreams

we walk away from setting light and stride into the somber night ending in an endless dusk the vibrant mornings dying husk and as we sleep, and as we die our fading soul can never cry and as we die, and as we weep our fading bodies fall asleep and as we weep, and as we wake our anaesthetic minds awake and as we wake, and as we fade we dream of heaven, fiction made and as we fade, so do we die and dream of darkness as we lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/31/2015 12:38:00 AM
Nicely balanced, rhythmical, interestingly worded, enjoyable read...but, again, a little overly repetitious in spots and a little seemingly forced conclusion at the ending...you have a lot of talent...
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Date: 1/30/2015 10:55:00 PM
Beautiful write syd... regards,nads!
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