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Wake Up Little Mermaid

In the water way down deep A little mermaids fast asleep Dreaming of how it would be If one fine day she could see The wonderful world on the land And everything that is so grand Imagining her tail would Split in two so that she could Walk around exploring sights All the beautiful delights From every corner, street and space A smile upon her face Lights and music, kids and fun Her adventure has begun But soon she starts to miss here world And this unhappy mermaid girl Wakes up and excitement starts To fill up her gladdened heart Being back where she belongs Singing a precious new song As her sea friends join right in Joyous laughter will begin No more dreaming, shes awake To her home in the blue lake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/15/2019 6:22:00 PM
Lovely, Robin. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:27:00 PM
Robin, Congrats on your awesome Mermaid win <3 ~Linda~ <3
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Date: 8/17/2014 9:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win Robin!! A different take but I like it.
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Date: 7/18/2014 2:47:00 PM
Robin, Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations on a nice win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/16/2014 8:32:00 AM
There's no place like home... Good one. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/15/2014 7:31:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations Robin Hugs Jan xxxx
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Date: 7/15/2014 11:39:00 AM
There were many great poems in the contest. Yours was one of the best. Thank you for entering my contest and letting me help to display your work here on PoetrySoup.
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Date: 5/31/2014 8:45:00 PM
I've always found forested blue lakes to be so peaceful, and tranquil, just as your mermaid does. What a wonderful place she lives, and what a unique way to see it you have. Well penned, and best of luck with the comp.
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Date: 5/30/2014 11:49:00 PM
this is sweet, Robin, and different to have her on a blue lake!! It sounds so serene.
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Date: 5/30/2014 6:17:00 PM
Beautifully written this will do well in the contest Robin. hugs Jan xxx
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