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Wake Up

How can i forget when the memory still haunts me? I never thought it would be this hard Wake up! Teach me how to forget Show me how you can mend a broken heart Is it ...really that hard? I doubt ..if the sweet aroma i once breathed still exists .. I scream at the top of my lungs all i can hear..is the echo of me Wake up! It's a wild place Our hearts are wild creatures And our ribs..are the cage Open up your eyes..I'm ready to let go Hold on to me..erase the past's sweet-bitter memory

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Date: 12/23/2023 3:29:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/13/2016 1:36:00 AM
Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours.
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Date: 5/4/2016 11:53:00 AM
Lina,, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Date: 1/27/2016 7:43:00 PM
lovely write... LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 2:03:00 PM
Very nice, you should return and write more
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:21:00 AM
Lina, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2015 1:16:00 PM
welcome sweetheart^^very nice poem 'm waiting eagerly for the next one^^
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Date: 6/3/2015 10:26:00 PM
'Our hearts are wild creatures, and our ribs are the cage'- great write, Lina. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy your stay. Viv x
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Lyna Mas
Date: 6/4/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thank you for your opinion and the nice welcome.I feel flattered,that my humble poem,got to your liking!^^
Date: 6/3/2015 9:37:00 PM
A very lovely piece. I feel you through this piece. Great write. :)
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