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in the womb, a life unborn unlimited potential not yet tanted by the hate of this world. a simply blissful existence, halfway between life and death all things are possible limitations don't exist Once in the world will he or she be prosecuted for reasons not understood, with the verdict guilty already in place Will it, he, her, them be given a chance. Or will their dreams be crushed even before they start, Dream big, go far told to them from the time of forever. Only to be crushed by the truth of humanilty. Dream big, go far Wake up and go no more. Reality sets in, life is too short there's not enough time. Reality set in so they dream no more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/17/2012 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear Jalisa! hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/17/2012 12:10:00 PM
CONGRATS ON A SUPER WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/16/2012 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Jalisa. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:53:00 AM
Many congrats Jalisa on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:31:00 PM
BIG BIG Congratulations on your win friend Jalisa. Hugs! **Maria**
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:38:00 PM
congratulations on your win.Lee
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:28:00 PM
Jalisa, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD
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Date: 10/14/2012 6:05:00 PM
great write Jalisa,words with sooo much truth
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