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Waiting's Knife

…waiting’s knife slices time in broader swaths stacking jagged moments chaffing minutes raw, in existential unease …one second snags the next …the knife dulls moments fray and shred tomorrow folds today; time’s teeth - rounded memories meld a transcendent balm deeply rubbed by fading voices a hospice hallway dims… one light - grows brighter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/3/2016 3:29:00 AM
David, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:30:00 AM
Lovely poem n win david.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:25:00 PM
a smashing end line, david.. sweet congrats and huggs!
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:22:00 PM
David, congrats on your placement in the contest, a great poem :) *smiles* -luloo
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