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Waiting To Confess

Chin thrust forward, held in right hand pleasant sweep of hair graces unexceptional forehead Thoughts percolate, bubble lightly, retreat mouth scrunched up into grudging position

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 8/2/2023 12:30:00 PM
John cracked me up with his comment Gershon. Priceless his comment lol and your response...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/2/2023 7:10:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! There's more where that came from, Michael! ~ Behind the soiled curtain
Date: 7/31/2023 3:54:00 PM
I went to confession once, told the priest that I had impure thoughts. He asked "if I had entertained them"....i replied. "no, they kinda entertained me"....
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Date: 7/31/2023 6:43:00 PM
Did the priest fondle you or anything?! ~ Just askin'
Date: 7/31/2023 2:35:00 PM
Very powerful emotion, so artistically described. Pangie
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Date: 7/31/2023 6:43:00 PM
Thanks, Pangie. Quite a compliment there. Much appreciated. :) gw
Date: 7/31/2023 7:18:00 AM
I can feel the angst, Gershon! You’ve caught the imagery of a difficult moment fraught with differing perspectives.
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Date: 7/31/2023 6:46:00 PM
I also caught three butterflies and two fireflies. Net gain: +5
Date: 7/30/2023 9:36:00 PM
Great posture. Meticulous description of the tension and relief of a confession about to take place. (Did I get the right interpretation?)
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Date: 7/31/2023 6:47:00 PM
You are the judge of that, not me... Seriously, I'm in no position to judge... :) gw

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