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Waiting Patiently

waiting patiently... drinking in the warm soft sun oranges ripen For the contest; Very Strict Haiku Sponsored by Charles Henderson

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:38:00 AM

PAULA, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! ENJOYED YOUR HAIKU,, `" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 11/22/2011 5:00:00 PM

Excellent Paula! So jealous that you can do this form flawlessly :)

Tracy Edwards

Date: 11/21/2011 5:14:00 PM

Juicy Paula..i luv it :) xx

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/20/2011 9:56:00 PM

you painted a beautiful picture in this haiku

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/11/2011 11:51:00 AM

this makes me want to pick, and let the juice run down my chin! mmm !! ps...a big thank you for my placement in your contest, Paula. What a great word "being" to inspire many different roads! Thanks very much!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 8:40:00 PM

beautiful lines of visual delight Paula.. good luck in the contest .. thankxx for your choosing my Superb Being for one of your winners tonight.. this write meant much to me as your theme prodded my creative juices very much.. thankxx for inspiration and honor of winning luv.. much appreciated ...