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Waiting Is a Date Certain

Waiting is a date certain, with patience. There is a solitude in waiting, as it has many forms, the waiting that goes unnoticed, as we wait for the morning, as we wait for the night as we wait for tomorrow. Waiting has shades, whether we wait for a birth, or wait for a death. The differences are light and dark Waiting is a clock hand that never moves, its an anticipation of an end Waiting is time spent with the soul, it exposes you to your true self, and reveals the constant. A quiet soul reveals itself in contemplation, A restless soul reveals itself in frustration. Both in a motionless realm, that unveils truth to the blind, as they wait. 1/22/16 contest Becca's Inspiration " Waiting "

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Date: 1/24/2016 4:23:00 PM
I was doing this one last night and then went to the contest page again and saw it is for only 10 to 20 lines CRAP. mine is like 50 ARGGGG (oops,I can see your fine piece is over limit too. Just put some of the lines together. Geeez)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/24/2016 7:13:00 PM
I hope you can shorten yours, mine is only 20 unless I need new glasses
Date: 1/22/2016 9:03:00 PM
wow, this is DEEP and GOOD. I think I have seen you do free verse like this before. It suits you, Frederic. You should try it more often!!
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