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Waiting In Limbo

WAITING IN LIMBO Sitting on the muddy banks of faded realities, Lingering in the spaces of time, lost souls Struggle: seeking another dreamer. The pawn brokers edge their grasp Beyond the sunset; leaving frail victories Festering and waning in the winds of change. White opiates assault lagging black dreams. Comatose minds mesmerized by fantasy freedoms Rot away: oblivious to the tightening of the silent chains. Like a drooping bosom dried of nurturing tears, Life sags on and time chases its own ghost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/23/2019 7:18:00 AM
beautiful poem penned
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/24/2019 8:35:00 AM
Mahtab, thanks for the read and feedback. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe
Date: 2/23/2019 6:47:00 AM
The into is stronger than oak Muddy banks of faded realies Thats my type of stuff
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Date: 2/24/2019 8:36:00 AM
John, thanks for the read and feedback. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
Date: 2/18/2019 7:23:00 AM
Very nicely written! Great work!
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/18/2019 7:54:00 AM
Komal, thanks for the read and feedback. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.
Date: 1/7/2015 3:09:00 PM
Wow, so powerfully descriptive!
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Millard Lowe
Date: 2/18/2019 7:56:00 AM
Casarah, many thanks for your read and time took to send wonderful feedback. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe.

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