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Waiting For the World To End

If you look backwards in time you might see us It was August… too many summers ago to recall Sometime after midnight, ….my brother and I Slipping through the valley of sleep Crawling out the window, to the roof of the old sun-porch Drinking excitement in late summer's breeze Sprawled on a bed of shingles and leaves Anticipation growing with each falling star Holding our breaths, as the sky fell apart… … while waiting to see if the world would end Another year drifted by, other summers would fly Childhood changed shapes, many ways like the wind We forgot of the thrill of that lone summer night Chill of winter set in,… with the worst kind of news, ...our mother was ill Through the sill of the window, we heard bitter cold wind We sat her bed, while a new storm was brewing …….She was slipping…..slipping into the valley of sleep Together we'd been, now together again,…. sometime after midnight …waiting, we were, for our world to end ______________________________________________________________ 1/26/16 For Contest: "Waiting" Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Date: 2/3/2016 3:30:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:30:00 AM
Lovely poem n win Carrie.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:29:00 PM
splendidly conveyed, carrie...huge congrats on your win and huggs!
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:23:00 PM
Carrie, beautiful poem...Congrats on your placement :) *Smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/26/2016 8:19:00 PM
A sad and powerful story, told masterfully your poetry, Carrie. Well done!
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:26:00 PM
A sad yet reflective poem that all families go through..good luck in the contest
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