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Waiting For the Moon

The sun already came Bright and early And then smoothly it left as was its arrival The moon hasn't arrived yet It's running late The still dark night awaits Two love hearts lay in the dark waiting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/31/2015 7:33:00 AM
The queen of verse is ever on spot. The moon should soon emerge to its defense!
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 4/8/2015 2:48:00 AM
Lol thanks mumo
Date: 3/24/2015 2:52:00 AM
Lovely piece Njeri, great imagery !. Best regards my friend!.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 3:59:00 AM
Thank you Bill. Good day.
Date: 3/23/2015 11:45:00 PM
OH....how sweet!!! Love how you wrote about the sun and moon. I love both!!! And love? Well...that's the best part. Hugs
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/24/2015 12:09:00 AM
Lol, thank you Jade for your sweet comment. Good day my friend

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