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Waiting For the Eclipse

Saddest love story Sun chases moon forever Never catches it They stare across the Ocean laid out between them Praying they could meet A decade is an Eternity when you can''t Be with who you love Saddest love story Their time apart is too long Together too short - If you were the sun, and I were the moon...would you miss me as much as I would miss you?-

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Date: 1/31/2014 9:30:00 AM
PEN, :) thanks you for the wonderful winning poem. Enjoy your day. Love ~ SKAT~
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Date: 1/15/2014 12:53:00 PM
- Both beautiful and sad .... well done, Jaquetta - I like it!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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