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I wish I could go back in time to childhood, Go back, back to when I was a little girl; Full of Christmas happiness and joy, And the anticipation of Santa coming. O, how I loved Christmas with my family, The cooking and the decorating of the tree; Mom fussing, grandma dusting and me helping, And dad untangling the lights (swearing). The fireplace was crackling and glowing, And outside the snow was beginning to fall; And us kids were so excited waiting for Santa Claus, Mom was telling us Christmas stories. Oh, on Christmas morning sneaking downstairs, And all the presents stacked beneath the tree; How could mom and dad and grandma be sleeping; I checked to see if Santa had eaten his cookies. Yes, only crumbs remained and his milk was gone, How did he always know what I wanted; It was the miracle of Christmas this adult thinks, I still enjoy waiting for Santa on Christmas Eve You, never know he could really exist for real, Just because we cannot see him, he could still be; That jolly man in a red suit, with white whiskers, Riding a red sleigh with his frisky reindeer. _____________________________ November 19, 2015 Narrative For the contest, Story Poem About Santa Claus Sponsor, Carol Eastman First Place

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Date: 1/2/2016 3:47:00 PM
love this, especially the last stanza - my thoughts, exactly : )
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Constance La France
Date: 1/2/2016 4:03:00 PM
Jack, thanks for visiting, yes I agree... he could really be !!
Date: 12/29/2015 10:51:00 PM
One never gets too old to believe. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Constance La France
Date: 12/30/2015 4:53:00 AM
Joyce thanks for visiting and for the congratulations
Date: 12/29/2015 6:19:00 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your nice win. Enjoy the coming year..... SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 8:36:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 12/28/2015 8:53:00 PM
Congratulations. Well-written poem describing to me what a perfect Christmas would be... Good job!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 9:59:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations ~
Date: 12/28/2015 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 10:00:00 AM
Nayda, thanks for the congratulations
Date: 12/28/2015 12:20:00 PM
Delightful poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2015 6:00:00 PM
Jan thanks so much for the delightful and the congrats ~
Date: 12/28/2015 12:03:00 PM
Congrats Broken Wings on your win, this is perfect...*smiles*
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Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2015 6:01:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats, the perfect and especially the smiles ~
Date: 12/23/2015 9:35:00 AM
Beautiful! Skillfully written... it held my interest from beginning to end. I love the part about Santa and the crumbs from the cookies you left him. SWEET! Best wishes, Keith
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Constance La France
Date: 12/23/2015 9:47:00 AM
Keith, thanks for visiting, I love those words, beautiful and skillful, and thanks for the nice comment too!!

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