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she livened the world with her songs one day the hippo heard her sing he looked up and insulted her beak she stared at her reflection in the water the hippo was right she was one ugly fowl she was one ungifted bird she swore never to come out again she swore never to sing again while she sits still the world is silent waiting for nightingale to sing

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Date: 6/15/2023 1:34:00 AM
Some poems just impact you. They leave an impression or a feeling. Yours did that to me. Nicely written. The world would be a very sad place without the sound of birds.
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Date: 2/23/2023 2:53:00 PM
Never insult someone for the way they look, for sadly that’s the reason many lives are took. Belle
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Date: 8/4/2021 9:45:00 AM
creative post.
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Eshe Benson
Date: 2/8/2022 2:32:00 AM
Thanks Kathy
Date: 7/22/2021 9:26:00 AM
ONE! So lost in darkness is the "moonless world" without the beautiful echoes of the Nightingale! Ah, "Black Patti"...Peace and Love.
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Date: 2/8/2022 2:32:00 AM
The world sits still waiting for Nightingale to sing. Thanks Millard
Date: 7/19/2021 3:13:00 PM
All I can say is wow.
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Eshe Benson
Date: 2/8/2022 2:30:00 AM
Thanks ??

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