Waiting

Waiting For the end To fall And the beginning To start. Waiting For the hope To light My heart, my soul My will. As the darkness Is on its way To establish Its supremacy. The fire in you The fiery orange Overshadowed In remote Wilderness But You're still Waiting Waiting For the sun To rain And the rain To shine.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 3:41:00 AM

- Hello M.O.L. :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/16/2015 10:00:00 PM

I enjoyed this, the ending was very neat...welcome to ps

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/16/2015 9:12:00 PM

Music, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 10/16/2015 6:07:00 PM

Nice poem, Music Of life, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT