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Waiting

Waiting Years have passed by as I endlessly wait, Sure you are at peace crazy... that's my trait, Life a dejected flute that you no longer hold, Its many holes waiting for your tender kiss, Warm breath to be blown inside of me, Magical melodies ... Those loving moments longings that got buried, Waiting to erupt anytime passion volcano, Molten smooth lava to unleash my desires, Asleep on flames ... Drumming beats of a broken heart, Losing all rhythm waiting to be mend, My soul you took along a mere body now crawls, Abraded bleeding ... Faint colourful images treasured deep within, Spirits that intrigue for all times to come wait, Be sung as regional songs those tragic tales of love, Glorious pages of history .. Written Sept 9th, 2015 For contest "Waiting" by James Rogers Awarded 1st place win Entered into "Best love poem #3" poetry contest by SKAT A Awarded 10th place win

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Date: 1/26/2016 9:16:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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Date: 1/17/2016 3:40:00 PM
Amazing best loved poem landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 1/13/2016 10:32:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Best love poem win. Thank you for the support **SKAT**
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Date: 10/20/2015 8:10:00 PM
So nice to read your writing this evening, I've missed you and your verse. Light & Love
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Date: 9/22/2015 7:05:00 PM
Dr Upma, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 6:24:00 PM
Beautiful, heart-wrenching--conveying the theme of waiting for love . . . and hurting. Congratulations Janice
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Date: 9/21/2015 12:17:00 PM
So lovely...I like how you compared yourself to a flute he's no longer playing. Congratulations, Dr. Upma!
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Date: 9/20/2015 3:52:00 PM
Dr. Upma, I enjoyed your piece today. Good imagery. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/20/2015 3:34:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this poem, Upma...so many captivating phrases! ~ Congratulations on your high flying win:) // paul
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Date: 9/20/2015 2:27:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Dr Upma...
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Date: 9/20/2015 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations, Upma; great write.
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Date: 9/20/2015 12:36:00 PM
what a beautiful write many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/20/2015 12:26:00 PM
Heartiest Congratulatins Upma! A wonderful win,
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Date: 9/15/2015 2:04:00 AM
DR. Upma A. Sharma Vigorous I loved the story of poem.It touched me more from the line" Those tragic tales of love,glorious pages of history. Wonderful. Deepak Chalise.
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Date: 9/10/2015 3:54:00 AM
excellent write Dr. Upma.. luck in the contest.. =')
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Date: 9/9/2015 10:13:00 PM
What a fabulous piece. This flows smoothly within heart of the readers and depicted imagery of your longing.........A.M.
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Date: 9/9/2015 6:09:00 PM
WELL DONE. Good luck in the contest, Dr. Upma.
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