Waiting

I wait and wait for the time to be right, Where there is no boundary, or any risks to fight. The sun rises up, and the sun sets down, and my world keeps spinning around and around. There must be an answer, or a prayer to say, For this is what I search for, at the end of the day. Closer and closer, the solutions come to mind, where the answer is had, I may just be blind. But search and prayer, wherever you roam, And stay true to yourself through skin and bone. For if it's something that you love or hate, The best thoughts can be there, if you just wait. Paul Walmsley

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Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 9:13:00 PM

PAUL, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**

Paul Walmsley
Date: 8/8/2015 4:43:00 PM

Thank you SKAT, I really appreciate the kind words.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2015 11:39:00 PM

I love the ending. Paul, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Paul Walmsley
Date: 7/24/2015 2:00:00 PM

Thanks so much Linda! I look forward to reading some of your poetry as well. :)

Skat A

Date: 7/21/2015 3:03:00 PM

Hi Paul, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Paul Walmsley
Date: 7/22/2015 7:58:00 AM

Hi SKAT A, thank you for the warm welcome here. I just joined yesterday, and I just started writing my own poetry this past month. I look forward to reading other poems on here. As well as writing more of my own.