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Waiting It doesn't seem so long ago, A little girl was born. Always wanting my attention, Unable to give her more. The little girl is walking, Waiting to hold my hand. With her shovel and her bucket, To make castles in the sand. Mommy your always busy, Can’t you hear my plea? I don't need what money can buy, I just want you here with me. Mommy can you hear me? It seems your never home. I'm just a little girl, Waiting by the phone. Mommy, I got the part, In the talent show at school. Please say you can make it, So I can see the pride in you. Hey Mom, I made the team, Can you make it to my game? I'm sorry, but work is way too busy, I just can’t get away. How the years have flown right by, Realizing all that I have missed. Never fully understanding, All that I dismissed. So now she is all grown up, Doesn't need me anymore. No longer is she waiting, For me to come through the door. I guess the roles have been reversed, For it’s my turn to wait at home. I'm just a mother, Waiting by the phone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/27/2015 10:58:00 PM
Bobbi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/26/2015 12:24:00 PM
Bobbi, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 3/25/2015 11:53:00 PM
Mommy your always busy, Can’t you hear my plea? I don't need what money can buy, I just want you here with me - yep - nice
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Date: 3/25/2015 4:57:00 PM
Bobbi welcome to the site. Loved the imagery and the emotional punch. Hope to read more from you soon. ~Jan
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Date: 3/25/2015 3:00:00 PM
Wow, I actually loved it (: And the ending lines, I'm so touched. It is so important for mothers to maintain their bond with their children, well done
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Mel Marakalala
Date: 3/25/2015 5:15:00 PM
It's a great pleasure, your work is lovely
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Bobbi Vizzerra
Date: 3/25/2015 3:11:00 PM
Thank you for your comment and for being the first as well. I hope you're having a great day:)

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