Waiting

I'm still waiting for you to contact me... For you to tell me you were wrong To say that you miss me That you're sorry you're gone... I'm still waiting to fill this whole in my heart... For the tears to quit coming; The happiness to start I'm still waiting for my Prince Charming... For my perfect gentleman The one that my forever may soon begin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2015 6:18:00 PM

This is so many of us women , what we are waiting for. However, you pass a certain age where the dream is less and less bright. (and you marry) hahaha. I enjoyed this one, Logan. Thanks for your comment on my poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2015 10:48:00 PM

Logan, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2015 1:00:00 PM

LOGAN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

John Paluszek

Date: 3/25/2015 4:07:00 PM

Excellent poem, I can definitely relate, very well done

Logan Holliday
Date: 3/26/2015 8:20:00 AM

Thank you, it means a lot :)