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I sit here enjoying nature From high up on the tree I gaze an encompassing all that is around me The weather is cool With a soft breeze flowing through the autumn leaves Colors of greens turning to shades of red, yellows, purples, and browns Gently falling like a light feather To the floors beneath the canopy of trees A light shower of cool rain Settles on everything in sight With sunshine reflecting of the water droplets Each making a rainbow of it’s own With colors of reds, yellows, blues, and violets My attention is caught with the sounds of movement in the brush With the rustling and stirring of the different colored leaves Of shades of red, yellows, purples, and brown On the floors beneath the canopy of trees I fly very quietly in pursuit of my prey Eventually spreading my wings and striking with my feet To snatch my prey I am sitting on my perch hooting Swivel my head more than 180 degrees looking in all directions Encompassing all that is around me Waiting for the sounds of movement in the brush to start again 10/24/2014

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Date: 6/22/2019 9:58:00 PM
You've captured the silent, wild essence of the owl beautifully, Eve. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/12/2016 10:51:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Eve....I love it!
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Date: 2/12/2016 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for the compliment and your special visit. Hugs Eve
Date: 2/12/2016 3:13:00 AM
Your poem shares the endearing qualities that owls gift us with Eve. Lovely! #7
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Date: 2/12/2016 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, for the compliment and the high rate. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/19/2015 6:59:00 PM
Is there a better poem about an owl? I don't think so. The imagery is rich, the flow just right, and the message realistic and instructive. I relished every line.
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Date: 9/19/2015 10:29:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Paul. You have made my night hugs Eve
Date: 7/11/2015 12:40:00 PM
Great personification, Eve! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/12/2015 9:29:00 AM
Thank you, Kim, for congratulations. hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 3:04:00 PM
Eve, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
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Date: 7/12/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Skat, hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 2:08:00 PM
Eve, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/12/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, for congratulations. hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 8:16:00 AM
Wisdom took flight with this piece. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/12/2015 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Rick, for your compliment and congratulations. hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations, dear Eve on a well-deserved win! Pandita
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Date: 7/12/2015 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, Pandita, for your compliment and congratulations. hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 3:58:00 AM
Wonderful write n win Eve! A perfect 7!
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Date: 7/12/2015 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma , for your compliment and congratulations. hugs Eve
Date: 5/28/2015 9:35:00 PM
A silent but deadly hunter ....congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 5/29/2015 12:23:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph ;~) hugs dear friend
Date: 5/28/2015 6:01:00 PM
Eve, just like the hapless prey in the poem I never saw the owl coming. Well done visual cover up of the deadly intent. Congrats on the well earned high mark.
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Date: 5/28/2015 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, John, for your inspiring compliment. Wildlife is fascinating for me to watch in their environment.
Date: 5/28/2015 3:47:00 PM
this is very cool. You make a magnificent owl, my dear. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 5/28/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea , for your inspiring compliment. I think next one I write will be a little bird chasing off the big birds. Hugs dear friend eve
Date: 5/28/2015 2:57:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE**
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Date: 5/28/2015 9:30:00 PM
Thank you for your inspiring compliment,Skat :~). Your judgement has made my day to want to write. Hugs Eve
Date: 1/1/2015 6:53:00 PM
Nice imagery, Roper. You rouse my feelings again from my poem "Longing."
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Date: 1/1/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Itsoghole, I went back and read your poem, it was beautiful
Date: 10/25/2014 10:11:00 AM
Wonderfully written Eve. Beautifully expressed visions of an Owl.
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Date: 10/25/2014 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Brenda, your work has truly been enjoyed. :) hugs eve
Date: 10/25/2014 9:33:00 AM
A beautiful Owl Eve...I really like this....hugs Tim
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2014 10:46:00 AM
Hello Pandita, I love your compliments, thank you so much love and hugs :) eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2014 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Tim, yes a Horned Owl, I figured you’d like it :) eve
Date: 10/24/2014 11:52:00 PM
Beautiful write, Eve! The imagery and personification are awesome and I love it, my friend! Bravo! Pandita
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2014 10:51:00 AM
Hello Pandita, I love your compliments, thank you so much love and hugs :) eve

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