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Waiting

why did you have to leave couldnt you stay a little longer lonelyness in me is a lot more stronger i know i will see you again untill then my heart will mend so much i miss me and you with memories that feel brandnew so untill i meet you there my heart pain it shall bare please can you hear what im saying come back for me daddy im still here waiting 8/2/36-1/11/11

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Date: 3/10/2016 1:08:00 PM
Barbara, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/5/2012 3:15:00 AM
Moving...your pain is evident as well as the love for your Daddy. May God give you peace. :) Lary
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Date: 3/2/2012 5:12:00 PM
Reminds me of CATS IN THE CRADLE, Julius La Rosa has a beautiful version of it on Youtube. Nice poem you have written, I hope your Daddy stays longer next time.
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:12:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Barbara. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:01:00 PM
Touching poem Barbara, waiting for daddys love. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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