Wail Street

raped, abused at six a brutal life in sex trade she now in Wail Street

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/2/2015 12:27:00 AM

Rajat, I'd like to introduce a comparison with Wall Street - it is such a sad truth that with just one letter difference in the spelling, there's a world of difference in how the same girl could have lived. There are many who have risen above their misfortunes, but those that got bogged down in the muck not of their own making deserve the most sympathy...A powerful call on a social issue! A 7 no less...Best regards...Kim :)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/1/2015 12:19:00 PM

Child abuse, especially sexual, must be totally condemned. You, Rajat, have managed to highlight it so very well in just a few lines! #7 // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/30/2015 1:16:00 PM

Hello Rajat! Well written pen!. A very raw deep dark haiku, my dearest friend. A 7 from me!Have a lovely weekend! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxxx D. ^O^"