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Wado Pointed Ears

My dear friend I keep you often in my mind You guided me to my native path Dancing with me through feilds of time Where to an Elder I have talked at last To find what might be my truer name Though Red Pony I hold close as She runs through my hearts flame Red Pony flying through the fields of wheat Painted hand prints on her cheeks A warrior and lover who fights when true Not a battle could be lost between I and you Fox tails swish through thick forests trees I peer through amber lenses and you peer back at me Wado I speak into pointed ears A wolf brother stands where a fox had appeared Mingled tails meet as they greet one another Waiting for the name to be spoken from an elder.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/28/2013 1:58:00 PM
I love this!! I am not nearly connected enough to my roots sadly...but this is definitely a deep and spiritual journey u are on!! All the best :)
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:32:00 PM
A pleasing and spiritual journey read from your lines today. Brilliant imagery.
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Date: 10/17/2013 1:03:00 AM
It was nice to take a glimpse into the deep spirituality of your writing. I sense intense passion in these lines, which is both riveting and attractive. I need to come around more often to your page. Astounding work! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/16/2013 2:21:00 PM
This astonishing write takes me evrywhere I need to be Jay - your native purity & vision are thrilling to me, humbling as well - a masterpiece for all time - FAV. File for sure - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/16/2013 8:31:00 AM
A very deep and creative work of art. Nicely penned. Nice to have you among us. Kudos. Wishing you the best of luck. Hugs and love
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Date: 10/14/2013 4:41:00 PM
amazing beautiful piece of writing
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Jay Loveless
Date: 10/15/2013 9:08:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 10/14/2013 3:04:00 PM
You must have a thing for the Fantasy genre. This was awesome. You set the tone very well!
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Jay Loveless
Date: 10/15/2013 9:08:00 AM
I do a bit. Sometimes I tend to write in what I think of a literal/non-literal sense. Where it could be taken both ways. This is one of those times, where I describe us as wolf and fox but am also speaking of spirit totems and Native names. Im currently awaiting to receive my new name :3

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