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Wabi Sabi

Kato was a mutt-product:- breeding run amok No purity meant the pound of death-induction Only his adoption saved him from that inferno turning life into moments full of simply-perfect: Each summer, the sun stroke a furry black hue Elevating it with a sheer of burgundy elegance Pauses were paws-aplenty with a trot and stop Leaves all fallen he sniffed, callings of ethereal Even winter was a nose-frozen-water pleasure And spring lasted, always in his outdoor mania So the decade ran prancing into walking years… Under rains, by the river running, a dog by you Racing by faster with memories, toward too far Ending in the hardest letting go - a broken bye. 12/31/23

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Date: 1/5/2024 1:57:00 PM
I knew this would do well Congratulations on your placement on the contest..
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Date: 12/31/2023 3:11:00 PM
I hate wasabi, but I like this wabi sabi
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/31/2023 6:16:00 PM
Lol! Hello there…it’s great in wee amounts and will cure all headaches in larger doses :)) glad you like this one.. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2023 12:04:00 PM
I think Craig will love this one.. excellent take on the contest.. great use of words and analogy..
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 12/31/2023 12:27:00 PM
Thanks SO… i forgot one line about spring and just added it.. i did use two words Craig finds overused :))

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