Vultures Circling

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Life and death..Nature's morticians..

. vultures circling over fall's red golden leaves.. suddenly dive lunch

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2012 11:00:00 AM

I am so happy to be able to read some of your amazing poetry today Sara. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I will be back another day to read through more of your poetry. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/24/2011 12:01:00 AM

HELLO SARA, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! iI HAVE A FEELING YOU WILL SPEND IT WELL WITH YOUR FAMILY...Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.

Tim B

Date: 11/18/2011 8:29:00 PM

I would pick your brain as Mrs. Carolyn thought to but as she said, it's best left to the imagination what the vulture's found. But it's a great way to elicit the sense of death that we identify with the season of fall. Bravo.

Judy Ball

Date: 11/18/2011 7:55:00 PM

Very well done Sara. You paint a vivid picture. God Bless, JB

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/18/2011 6:04:00 PM

Nice mystery allowing us to guess what's beneath those leaves, Sara. I appreciate your subtle approach in not saying something crass like "last week's roadkill." I'd prefer to think the vultures saw some mice in the leaves. Thanks for leaving it up to our imaginations! Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/18/2011 3:08:00 PM

I could imagine what that lunch is...yuck! I love the imagery you have supplied within this write!! Wonderful work!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/18/2011 9:33:00 AM

Don't want to see any vultures - although I do like most birds, Intresting haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anishw

John Rhinem

Date: 11/18/2011 9:30:00 AM

You always wete a bit of a Bat were you not. ~ John!:) ~