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Vulnerable The only flower blooms in a feild of withered weeds. The wind howls a strong,violent breeze. A single drop of water drips on the desert sand. So lost and alone, just like I am. New life exposed to zero below, A snowflake falling through sun beams. In this place that is oh, so cold, The last leaf on winters bare trees. I am exposed, like I have no skin. I've just been born, I am naked again. A thousand eyes behold, there's nothing they can't see. Nowhere to hide in this vast, stormy sea. You've torn down my only refuge... Stolen all of my pride... Given every hand a stone... they sling with their eyes... And now, here I stand, Since you left me alone, Since you left me alone, With who I am.

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Date: 4/29/2024 3:19:00 PM
Sad poem of loss and loneliness. Glad it's only fiction for you
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/30/2024 2:37:00 AM
Oh if only... This is a past hurt but I still recall the feelings and heart break. I've since built a strong hold! Thanks for visiting!

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