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Vortex of Pain

Life is a vortex of pain, Coiling into the abyss. To never kill the spirit, But to cause grief infinite. Yet with death pain abated, My mind cleared of all its woe, I shall rest six feet below.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/10/2016 5:02:00 PM
Thanks Linda! :D
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Date: 4/10/2016 4:44:00 PM
Hi James ..this is free verse or verse... Enjoyable experience, living in a vortex world.... I guess resting is the only way out... Linda
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James Nelson
Date: 4/10/2016 5:03:00 PM
Thanks Linda! :D
Date: 4/10/2016 4:40:00 PM
This is an edit of a poem I wrote a LONG time ago. Figured I'd post it here for everyone to enjoy. I wasn't sure what form it was, if anyone knows, please leave the info in the comments. It has 7 lines each with 7 syllables.
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