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Voices In the Walls

There are voices trapped within the walls along the halls that link old rooms and childish laughter bubbles the sleek designer paint new owners placed to seal away the past; the color memory keeps bleeding through where sunshine warms, window-framed like children's silhouettes. Our names, cement prisoners, call from the curving walk where hopscotch chalk faded in the rain. The hill across the road heaves a heavy sigh and echoes of our play escape in ripples of the leaves. Thin, haunting voices draw me backward, like the calls of baying hounds alerting on a scented trail; there will never be treasure more rare than the cherished memories embedded in the house we first called home. © September 11, 2015

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Date: 3/11/2022 9:21:00 PM
"Like the calls on baying hounds" - Very beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:49:00 PM
Faye, Congrats on your Screwed X win. LINDA
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write Faye..
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Date: 1/20/2016 8:23:00 AM
Faey, Congrats on your win. SKAT **
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Date: 9/15/2015 11:19:00 AM
This also reminds me of the stone house I grew up in at BJU...Don't know if you remember it but it set back across the street from the old gym. It is what inspired my poem 'Wild Cherries' (the cherry tree in the back yard)...Vicki and I walked over there during a visit back in the 90's and it bought back a flood of memories but everything seemed so SMALL compared to when I was a youngster...
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Date: 9/15/2015 11:03:00 AM
So you're hearing voices now are you Faye? Just kidding of course! This is absolutely a brilliant recall of childhood memories...I was especially drawn to verse one where you speak of the memories bleeding through the sleek new paint. WOW...
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Date: 9/12/2015 10:23:00 AM
Faye, I love the imagery you used in this wonderful poem! Excellent metaphors! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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