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Voices

I lay in my bed dreaming in the darkness and like a huge serpent memories come creeping and the voices of the dead are demanding, the past covers me like a thick blanket I want to remove it, throw it off, push it away. but I cannot as the dream is too strong the voices too loud a cemetery gate is opening wide . . . and I enter into the hush and the rows of tombs and tombs now the voices are whispering . . . whispering my name and I cannot fight it anymore I fall into a dark void and I am falling, falling, falling into this dark dream . . . the tombs are wrapped in wispy, misty fog and vines caress the names engraved in cold stone I fall to my knees weeping and lamenting then . . . the sun is pouring in my bedroom window _____________________________ October 19, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Voices Copyright Protected, ID 16-839-846-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into,Contest 224 sponoser, Skat/Poet Destroyer Eighth Place

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Date: 10/18/2016 12:10:00 PM
wow, I missed this one somehow! Glad I get to read it now lady, loved this one a lot. You are so sweet and your writing is so tenderly deep and emotional..congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/18/2016 10:22:00 AM
A 7 for your moving, sadly lovely, WINNING poem, Constance! Janice
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Date: 10/17/2016 11:19:00 PM
Feel the distain of the dream. Tellingly put. Peace, Love and Joy.
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:58:00 AM
I could feel this dark dream as you so wonderfully describe it. This is really nicely done my friend.
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Date: 10/16/2016 2:49:00 PM
Oh, I really like that. It shows so much.
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