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Voiceless

The feeling of an empty shell... The feeling you wanted to cry... But you can't bring out the tear Feel's my heart crumble with fear

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/22/2015 3:29:00 AM

- Hello Jertrude :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 10/18/2015 4:30:00 PM

Jertrude, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jertrude Lapuhapo
Date: 10/20/2015 10:07:00 PM

thanks skat im glad to be yr friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/18/2015 2:38:00 PM

Jertrude, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jertrude Lapuhapo
Date: 10/20/2015 10:18:00 PM

^w^ thankz linda for accepting me as a friend. i too will enjoy reading yr poetry

Sarah Jabri

Date: 10/18/2015 1:36:00 AM

let the tears roll down your cheeks and let your heart breath for a moment... Welcome to the community my dear :)...I hope for you to be able to convey your thoughts and feelings here. We, at the soup are really nice people. Wishing you all the best!

Jertrude Lapuhapo
Date: 10/20/2015 10:09:00 PM

arigatou ^^ sarah