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Voice of Merman

Merman roars from the top of his lung's, to the thundering dark clouds Across his sky, in severe whistling, my head bows in your shame In the tune of change As my ocean swells, you begin to rip the insides out of me A mermaid from hell Eyes left me in the dark, snarling white fangs' shark like barricade of emptiness Ugly words bite Deep into the pain, each lash of the tongue Like you savour in pleasure Mouth ripping deep Distorted ugly lies As the poison drips Out of the foul mouth Becoming a vile beast Hell with you The heart withers, dying one time beauty Cracks in the ache, wounded severely Light, I look to you Loves holy name speaks, one time my little mermaid To the wicked ways You escaped hell, one of your creations Love in me disappeared, wishing on me The torment, my heart for you Died The heart in her turned black blue cold ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/25/2013 3:45:00 PM
I love the lay out , I love the poem , it takes ones imagination and takes form of any woman whom has hurt another , takes that form ! I have know a few of these mermaids ~~
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/27/2013 3:31:00 PM
medusa of the deep ha ha thank you ever so much for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 8/24/2013 2:55:00 PM
This is so sad..so painful..It fills the mind with questions.Why would a mermaid leave..and why would the merman let her go..Sad and beautiful
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/24/2013 3:04:00 PM
HE HAD NO CHOICE SHE TURNED DARK AND COLD THANK YOU EVER SO KINDLY FOR THE AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT APPRECIATED DEEPLY

Book: Shattered Sighs