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Voice of Heart

Forget the world and listen to your heart, As no one really cares whether close or apart.
Only u only u cn change urslf,
Be the golden novel chosen frm old book shelf.

The indiviual created by providence is only u,
Show ths to all nt in a sense evn one cld hve a clue.

Jst ponder over ur capabilities,
Strive on ur failures taking thm as ur casualties.

Work till as it gonna lasts forever,
live as today only was the last rain of  life shower.

Keep friens close bt enemies closer,
Fight with frnds bt have sympathy fr rival growers.

The day u reach at the top,
Jst come back with a next better hope.

Night when u ll fall down,
Wake up; smile with the mother earth brown.

Dont teach anyone a way to live life ,
No one actually needs ur guide.

Life is as easy as u think,
Hve the patience with wch u can stand still.

To live in ,heart is the best room,
Dont wait fr a bride or a groom.

Mah heart listens nd comprehends me very well,
Thn y didnt i try to leave this world of hell.

Y didnt i  accept the things whch my heart tries
May be i ll get the whole happiness wth permanent smiles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/27/2016 12:45:00 AM
Hey Manvi.....u have really good insight, your text style of writing distracted me a little though, and i had to read your piece about 3 different times.... I'm fairly new to the Soup as well, but i have learnt a few things since i've been here, and met some nice people (one of whom i see u've met already).....more than anything, have fun writing.
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Date: 2/26/2016 11:45:00 PM
Deep write, Manvi, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Manvi Arora
Date: 2/27/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank u so much ..i m glad tht u liked my poem... i wld luv to share my skills...i love to write wht comes in my heart usually some inspiring poems nd smewht romantic but most of them are related to our inner voices and present day conditions. I will definitely share with all my all the poems and definitely will go thrpugh all ur poems.??

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