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Vixen of the Mist

Wind-driven, deceptive, mysterious, cries vixen's pulsating, debauchery with haunting arias, mesmerizing! The lighthouse, fearlessly, captivated, by siren's symphonic orchestrations shines brighter, exclaiming calamity! She cautions vigilant navigators... fog's mirage masquerades mortality!..
______________________________ Inspired by Nette's Contest: The Lighthouse 9/23/14 By Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/29/2014 7:19:00 AM
packed with imagery and outstanding mood, carrie.. my pleasure to have you in my contest with thanks and big congrats!
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fascinating poem Carrie. Beautifully written.
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Date: 9/28/2014 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on another great win. Can I adopt you?
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:27:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:15:00 AM
I enjoyed the wonderful imagery, Carrie. congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/24/2014 5:23:00 PM
Aha! Caught you early did Ii? But I wanted to be FIRRSST (sob) There are no words to describe this but it IS going on my fav list (which you are dominating) From your biggest fan - Tim
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Date: 9/23/2014 2:23:00 PM
wonderful imagery here Carrie:-) good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/23/2014 1:34:00 PM
Carrie you are very talented
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