Vitality a Freed Verse

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment

VITALITY encapsulates celebrates innovation hurtling pell-mell straight towards an encounter with the viewer veering en route in movement one to another between wrong turns a restlessness some haste is detected & is understandable part of this zest underwhelming feels peculiarly unfamiliar in an encounter so brief an excursion disjointedly underplayed

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